Kya haal hai tumhara, yeh sawal keye baithay ho
Jantay nahee ke tum hi mera yeh haal keye baithay ho
Chiragh bujh ne ko hain, par hans rahay ho
Saray diye khud bhuja ke, kya kamal keye baithay ho
You really should write more.....this is really very good
You really should write more.....this is really very good (sorry previous came as anonymous not sure why)
I find it very amateur and only write in Urdu when I can’t even find the words in English to express my grief. Regardless the encouragement is appreciated, as always
I don't think it's amateurish in any way. Feelings being expressed never are
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You really should write more.....this is really very good
You really should write more.....this is really very good (sorry previous came as anonymous not sure why)
I find it very amateur and only write in Urdu when I can’t even find the words in English to express my grief. Regardless the encouragement is appreciated, as always
I don't think it's amateurish in any way. Feelings being expressed never are
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